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All visible English in docs/pitch/ is now literate American English in
whole sentences: slide headlines are plain statements that make the
slide's point (no "X, not Y" taglines such as "Ownership and control,
not a higher modelled return"), argument bullets became sentences,
"Read plainly:"/"unlocks" fragments are gone, and spelling, dates and
percentages follow American conventions ("labeled", "itemized",
"programs", "October 20, 2026", "60%").
Facts are unchanged: the style checker finds no number gone, added or
used fewer times; footers, Plan B/Plan A wording, sources and estimates
labels stay. Quoted doc section titles in the source lines keep their
original wording. Notes 109 to 120 words each.
Both PDFs regenerated (17 pages; dark 1.82 MB, light 2.01 MB).
deck_verify: 0 layout issues on 17 slides x 4 viewports x 2 themes,
charts, theme, navigation and presenter checks pass.