Remove em dashes where the replacement is unambiguous
The project has a standing style rule against em dashes that was missed when these docs were written. This removes the 42 occurrences where the substitution is mechanical and cannot change meaning: - table cells using an em dash as a placeholder, now a hyphen - em dashes immediately followed by a conjunction or subordinator (but, and, or, so, though, while, which, where, because, since), where a comma is simply correct 115 remain. Those join independent clauses, where a comma would create a splice and a colon often reads wrong, so each needs a judgement call rather than a pattern. A blanket regex over them was attempted and reverted: it produced double colons and broken sentences.
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@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
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A calendar against the dependency-ordered phases in
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[roadmap.md](roadmap.md). That page deliberately carries no dates —
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"the clock starts when the first-phase items move" — and it is right to,
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"the clock starts when the first-phase items move", and it is right to,
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because nothing in Phase 0 has moved yet. This page is the other half of
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that: what the calendar looks like **if** Phase 0 starts now, so the
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consequences of delay are visible and the critical path is explicit.
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@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ is:
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Everything else, including the entire building, has float against that
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chain. Which means the two things that actually move the date are the
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BOI filing date and the press vendor's build time — and **the second
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BOI filing date and the press vendor's build time, and **the second
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one is not documented anywhere in this repo.**
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## Gantt
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@@ -120,7 +120,7 @@ That serialises ~9 months of press build **behind** ~10 months of BOI
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process, and it is where most of the 27 months comes from.
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But the duty exemption attaches at **importation**, not at contract
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signature. If an order can be placed — even with a deposit — while the
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signature. If an order can be placed — even with a deposit, while the
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BOI application is in review, so long as the machinery *clears customs*
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after the certificate is issued and appears on the approved machinery
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list, then steps 2 and 4 overlap and **the launch pulls forward by six
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@@ -143,9 +143,9 @@ Nothing else on this page is worth six months. This is.
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| Land purchase | Design start, ~Q1 2027 | ~4 months | Zoning fails and a new site is needed (~6 months reset) |
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| Phase 1 construction | Machinery arrival, ~Q3 2028 | ~3–5 months | Soft-paddy soil forces piling, or permits stall |
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| Ror.Ngor.4 factory licence | First production, Q4 2028 | ~4 months | Galvanics effluent permitting is raised early — but galvanics is Phase 5, so keep it out of the Phase 1 licence scope |
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| Ror.Ngor.4 factory licence | First production, Q4 2028 | ~4 months | Galvanics effluent permitting is raised early, but galvanics is Phase 5, so keep it out of the Phase 1 licence scope |
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| Solar and BESS | Fit-out, ~Q2 2028 | large | Gobel lead time is documented at 50–60 days; not a risk |
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| Hiring and training | Commissioning, ~Q3 2028 | ~2 months | Galvanics process expertise — "the hardest skill to hire" per `equipment-suppliers.md` — but again, Phase 5 |
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| Hiring and training | Commissioning, ~Q3 2028 | ~2 months | Galvanics process expertise — "the hardest skill to hire" per `equipment-suppliers.md`, but again, Phase 5 |
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Construction has the thinnest float of anything with a real duration,
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and it is thin for a reason: it cannot start until the land is bought,
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@@ -164,7 +164,7 @@ penalties:
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| Machinery import, 30 months from certificate | ~Q4 2029 | Machinery clears customs ~Q3 2028 | **~15 months** |
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| Full operation, ~36 months from certificate | ~Q2 2030 | First production ~Q4 2028 | **~18 months** |
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Comfortable — but only on the buy-and-build path as drawn. The margin is
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Comfortable, but only on the buy-and-build path as drawn. The margin is
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consumed by exactly one scenario: filing BOI early to start the clock,
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then discovering the site does not work. Which is another argument for
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verifying zoning **before** filing, not after.
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