Remove em dashes where the replacement is unambiguous
The project has a standing style rule against em dashes that was missed when these docs were written. This removes the 42 occurrences where the substitution is mechanical and cannot change meaning: - table cells using an em dash as a placeholder, now a hyphen - em dashes immediately followed by a conjunction or subordinator (but, and, or, so, though, while, which, where, because, since), where a comma is simply correct 115 remain. Those join independent clauses, where a comma would create a splice and a colon often reads wrong, so each needs a judgement call rather than a pattern. A blanket regex over them was attempted and reverted: it produced double colons and broken sentences.
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@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ class, not a premium — it is what the presses and pallet racking need, and
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stepping up from a light-duty slab adds only on the order of 100–200 THB/m².
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The real cost variable is the ground underneath (see soil, below). A later
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value-engineering option is to zone the slab — 30 kN/m² under press hall and
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warehouse only, lighter under offices — but for rough pricing the whole
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warehouse only, lighter under offices, but for rough pricing the whole
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floor is specified at 30 so the number is conservative.
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### 1a. Panel core: where PIR is not enough
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@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ Simple industrial enclosures beside the main building.
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| Boiler hall | 66 m² | 6.0 m |
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| Biomass fuel store | 42 m² | 5.0 m |
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| Chiller room | 60 m² | 5.0 m |
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| Cooling tower pad (concrete pad only) | 10 m² | — |
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| Cooling tower pad (concrete pad only) | 10 m² | - |
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The 14 m flue stack comes with the boiler — excluded here. The boiler hall
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envelope should be non-combustible (mineral-wool panels or masonry), not
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@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ transformer (PEA), and land works beyond normal grading.
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soft-to-medium Lamphun valley soil and to **state the foundation
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assumption they price** (footings vs driven piles; a piled slab can add
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several hundred to 1,000+ THB/m²). The soil, not the slab spec, is the
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main price risk in the whole package — and it now applies to 4,387 m² of
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main price risk in the whole package, and it now applies to 4,387 m² of
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pavement and a 1,711 m³ fill platform as well as the building.
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- **Tank proximity to the building**: the fire water tank sits about 4.5 m
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from the main building. Full, it is ~250 t on a 9 m ring foundation. On
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