randomly proofread small sections

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Daniel Barlow
2025-04-06 23:53:03 +01:00
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@@ -136,12 +136,12 @@ to attach serial cables to (soldering not required), so it is lower-risk
than some devices. Using some other Liminix-supported MIPS hardware
device also _ought_ to work here, but you accept the slightly greater
bricking risk if it doesn't.
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See <<_supported_hardware>> for device support status.
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You may want to read and inwardly digest the section about <<serial>>
connections when you start working with Liminix on real hardware. You
You may want to read and inwardly digest the section on <<serial>>
when you start working with Liminix on real hardware. You
won't _need_ serial access for this example, assuming it works, but it
allows you to see the boot monitor and kernel messages, and to login
directly to the device if for some reason it doesn't bring its network